I think the coverlines on your front cover should be made bolder so it can stand out more. On your dps you used a red quote, maybe you should of interpretated that colour into the journalism piece.
Your DPS would take 3 pages of your magazine, think it would be better if you used a smaller image for your DPS and actually made 2 pages, other than that i think your magazine is does not any improvements in my opinion.
I think the coverlines on your front cover should be made bolder so it can stand out more. On your dps you used a red quote, maybe you should of interpretated that colour into the journalism piece.
ReplyDeleteYour DPS would take 3 pages of your magazine, think it would be better if you used a smaller image for your DPS and actually made 2 pages, other than that i think your magazine is does not any improvements in my opinion.
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